Daisy -
She has used media terminology to express her interest and what she likes in all three content pages.
by daisy using keywords going to deep detail , she is able to express her ideas and what she likes about the content page. Her work is well written but has small grammatical errors.
The improvements that daisy could do is correcting her grammatical errors and proof reading her work over to find small selling errors as well.
Rochelle-
Rochelle has used such detailed paragraphs and her analysing skills are clearly shown all through her work. she stays consist all the way through her work. She stays detailed through all her content pages evaluations and keeps the level of vocab high and intriguing. Rochelle can improve by proof reading her work to find little spelling mistakes and to find grammatical errors. Maybe also to find larger images of the content pages so the reader can see clearly what Rochelle was looking at and doing her work on.
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